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Can you please tell me if this sales promotion letter is written correctly?

Are you overwhelmed and overlooked? Tired of waiting in those endless lines at the grocery and retail stores? We have the solution for you!

Since 2001, Shop for you has helped thousands of people take care of all their shopping needs. Our services will eliminate the holiday rush, so you can focus on looking fabulous. We specialize from choosing a perfect outfit for your special event to picking up your everyday needs. We also keep you informed of all upcoming specials and discounts to save you money.

Imagine the relief of knowing that all of your shopping worries are taken care of. For as little as $12 an hour, Shop for you will simplify your life and maximize your time. You can order quick and easy online or we can have a representative meet with you in the comfort of your home.

Call now and receive our special holiday offer of free gift wrapping or 10% off delivery fees. Offer good till December 24, 2008.



It sounds good to me. However, the prove of any good sales letter is in the response it generates.

So to anyone who is reading this, would you order their service?

Regards,
Dax

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