The following business letter sample was written to apologize for the behavior of one of the company's telemarketing staff. Here are a few tips on writing this letter:
Acknowledge the nature of the complaint and its impact upon the individual.
Briefly explain your perspective on the situation.
Express your understanding of the situation. Empathize with the individual's concerns. A few specific statements regarding the situation will show the reader that you really understand the matter at hand.
Detail the positive actions you have taken to resolve the situation at hand. If necessary provide a date or time of resolution.
Provide a brief, concise overview of the situation. Include any explanations or reasons that may provide a better understanding to the individual.
Assure the reader that you have taken the necessary steps to ensure there is no re-occurrence of the situation.
Here is the sample:
Dear Mr. Kermit,
Let me begin by expressing my thanks to you for bringing to my attention the actions of one of our sales representatives. We periodically monitor the calls of our telemarketers. This is to ensure the quality of our service and the courtesy extended to potential customers.
I must apologize for Miss Piggys' repeated callbacks to your home and her abusive language. In reviewing the recordings of Miss Piggys' station, I have verified the statements attributed to her in your letter dated May 15th. She is no longer employed by April Fools, Inc., and I can assure we have taken every possible step to make sure this does not happen again.
As our way of apologizing, I have authorized complimentary 12-month subscriptions in your name to our magazine We are all FOOLS. Additionally, should you wish to renew your subscription upon expiration you may do so at 50 percent off the current rate.
Again, I apologize for Miss Piggys' actions. If there is anything else I can do to rectify this situation, please let me know.
Sincerely,
Recommendations
3001 Business & Sales Letters "It's all simple to use...a well thought out and effective tool...we like it a lot." PC Guide, November 2002
If you want to write a letter fast, I highly recommend that you use the templates provided in 3001 Business & Sales Letters because they have (as the name suggest) 3001 Business & Sales Letters templates. This award winning software has by far the most comprehensive list of templates. Here is a list of the templates they have ordered by categories.
As I can see it, the templates will cover every conceivable business situation. With this product, all you have to do to be good at Writing Business Letter is to cut, paste and do a little bit of modifications. It even gives you phrases (see screen shot) when you need it to help you construct sentences. See the following business sample letter to see how this program will help you write any letter you want. It is by far the best value for your money.